8t87WALT: edit my wrItIng
Remember to:
- Reread out loud to yourself to check you have punctuatIon in the correct places - full stops, commas and question marks.
- Check each new sentence starts with a capital letter.
- Check that you have corrected any unlined spelling errors.
My Hero
A person who is my hero is Kalyn ponga
This person is my hero because he is my favourite Rugby league player
Two words that describe this person are Fast and side stepper
One thing the person does that I admire is he treats his team and the other team with respect.
One way I can be more like my hero is by picking up rubbish when i see it
Are you a hero? Write a few sentences telling about something that you did that you think was heroic. When I was little and me and my mum would cross the road I would (pretend) save her from cars. On Saturdays when I play, I would play as a team not by myself but as a team, playing as a team is different because rugby league is a team sport.
Hi Jared. I like how you did the "remember to" things, and I like you did that.
ReplyDeleteI don't really know your hero that much but now you told me how he is your hero.
But can you fix your writing? I could not read it because the writing has gone crazy. Nice post Jared! By the way how did you change your font in your blog? it's so cool but I don't know how to do it. Check out my blog if you want.http://odsjacku.blogspot.com/
Blog you later Jared!